Archile

Age/Gender: 20, Male
Location: Montevideo, Uruguay
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Would it be wrong, would it be right, if I took my life tonight?. chances are that I might

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Score: 7
Beat the System

"More!"

submission: Beat the System
date: July 13, 2006

The game was a bit short...I need my fix of BtS(Beat the System).
I loved the instuctions, I mean how you wrote everything ("If you havent read the instructions youll have to start over", "I take that back, you suck") it's quite funny ;).
I would have wished you made more stages with the "remove cursor from window" it was funny and interesting at the same time.

As a tiny bug, if you click "Replay" at the end(Before the blue line sweeps you, when you finish the game) The music wont stop playing,
Talking about the music, it fitted nicely, it'd be nice if you added a small "beep" when you touch walls.

Overall: Fun game, a bit short, but fun.

Author's Response:

Hah. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will make more in the future, and have alot more length and "artsyness" to it.

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Score: 8
Russisch Terrorist

"Tasteless fun :)"

submission: Russisch Terrorist
date: July 13, 2006

Funny, in a morbid way, I loved the screams:D.
Graphics: All the characters looked nice, the leg movement was a bit awkward(And you can only find it awkward if you look at it closely). I loved the ash animation(when they died) And I'd suggest making a quality button IN the game itself.
Sound: The music fitted nicely, the gunshots didnt "fit", but, as mentioned above, the screams were awesome.
Overall: Great Idea(Ive see a few like this, but this one has "missions"), and greatly executed. For the last level, I couldnt find the instuctions(And didnt know what to do) So, for the few who read this : You have to use the mouse to accelerate and brake. Once you get far enough to the right, Press "S" to make your guy get his upper half out of the window, and mash the key "A" to shoot, Press "S" again to make him get inside again, and accelerate, if you get too much to the left you loose.
As a little nitpick, how the hell does the guy survive each time he blows himself up?! :P.

Author's Response:

:D thank you!,,

very much!

i had some trouble finding the gunshot sound , so i actually put that one,,;P

and btw,,
i really dunno how he stayes aliwe ,, maybe there are just 4 twins haha!

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Score: 10
Blob Warrior

"It´s excellence is due to its simplicity"

submission: Blob Warrior
date: May 16, 2006

Tight game ,dude.Now, on the following paragraph I´ll adress the games thingies. Before praising, here are my two complaints:
-Sword...I think the hero´s reach is a bit too limited, perhaps you could increase the are of the initial swipe. Concerning this, I found it easier to hit enemies by holding space in front of them, it was faster(Since it repeats the same slash) and easier than doing the combo. Perhaps you could lower the damage of the first swipe...Or make the combo more deadly.
-Bombs...They were a very neat idea, and, very powerful items, yet I found it a bit odd that you have a limited amount, with no chance to enlargen. I think you should make 1 in 50 enemies, or so, carrie a bomb, so when you kill them you get it.
Now, praising time:
Graphics: Really great, the whole style, meaning the monochromatic "wholeness" and the way characters looked. The animations were very impressive, not only that, the font of the "ouch" totally fits the characters!. Graphically I saw no flaw whatsoever, therefore I award you a 10!:P.
Sound: After playing a LOT, the tune gets a bit old, however, since you added the "S" key, it's not that much of a problem. However, if it's the first time playing, that tune is actually interesting, and fits the game.
Overall: Exellent game, I wouldnt have expected it to be this good.
:D

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It is rare to get sense making reviews on NG! (This applies to all of you who already reviewed my game as-well). I am going to add a bomb power-up so that you can get more bombs, and will make the third hit in the combo super powerful. Sword reach will also be enlarged. Thank you so much for your praise! I am honored. I'll post the new version in the next couple days. ^^

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Score: 10
Pico: Therapy

"WHOA!"

submission: Pico: Therapy
date: April 30, 2006

Amazing flash!.
Graphics: Wow, everything looks awesome, amazing art style!, at the beggining I thought it would be light(Because of the intro), but then things got dark...and eventually gory. The animation was pretty fluid.
Sound: Nice music choice, that kind of metal is what fits this!.
Overall: One of the best submissions this day!

Author's Response:

Yeah I did that whole "light" intro on purpose so to maybe shock the viewer. Looks like it worked :D

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Score: 8
Bored Aliens Short 01

"Heh<----Yes this is my one liner"

date: March 11, 2006

Neat submission, it was enjoyable on many levels(Or should I say categories?). I think you should add a PLAY button at the start, instead of starting automatically, at first I thought you simply didnt know how to make buttons....but then the movie ended and there were clickable links and replay.

Graphics: The animation was neat, REALLY neat, I could have stared at the replay section for hours, that´s how nicely animated it is. The character design is weird, they are REALLY different(At least purple head and green face), so not only are they original, but the colouring style is also a plus. Instead of the over used Strong coulors, your´s are lightish, and the shadeing on the characters is nice too.
Sound: The Sounds fitted correctly, and for once, didnt mind that the movie itself didnt have music. The little tune used at the presentation fitted the "presentation tune music", and was nice to hear. The voice acting is good(not great), and the voices can be heard pretty clearly.
Humor: The humor was....very random to say the least. I liked how you avoided doing violence/sex related jokes(Wich seem to be the new trend "OMG I CUT HIS HEAD LOL ROFTLAMAO!!!"). But overall I found it funny :D
Overall: OMFG FRONTPAGE ON FIRST SUBMISSION!!!!!, you should be proud of yourself :)(I know it´s not your first flash, but it is your first submission here). I really enjoyed the toon, and would mind seeing more bored Aliens.

Author's Response:

A play button after it's loaded. Gotcha.
Thanks for commenting on the colours and shading, not many people have yet. I'm glad you think my character designs are really different and original, I designed them back in 1996 (when I was about 13/14) and they haven't changed that much since then.
And yes, I am avoiding sex and gore in this series. I see it as a challenge to entertain without those things.
I did all the voices myself this time, but am going to look into getting people to help me in the future.
This episode is more random than I imagine they should be because I woke up a few weeks ago and started working on it without a proper scripts and kept bolting bits on... I'm working on the next script more so it should be less random.
Thanks for the constructive review! Your comments have helped me :)

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Score: 7
4 Incomplete Games

"Actually Orange is better, green is....wEiRd"

submission: 4 Incomplete Games
date: February 28, 2006

Nyways, the graphics were simple(On all fours,LOL, "On all fours" HAHAHA!) yet the games themselves were simple, but all of them had a great concept behind, some just need a little polishing(Specially the controls on Plataform and Puzzle, I felt them..."odd"), and they´d be good games on their own!.
I cant believe you got the underdog award, this game is much better than that, czuse, even though they are simple, they are 4 games, yep, four times more you get on other submissions!.
Overall, I liked all four games, each one was original and highly enjoyable:).

Author's Response:

Haha good one about the four (actually, there were two with fours, so good job on both :D) Glad to hear you liked it.

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Score: 10
Arnold's Revenge

"Sweet"

submission: Arnold's Revenge
date: February 13, 2006

Wow!, the animation was really astounding, and the drawing are equally great, your Arnold looks fantastic, and the special effect(Specially the blur) were very well done and applied. The music was a good pic, and most of the dialogue is well, exept for a few of Arnolds lines, but the addition of subtittles were a nice addition. Another thing I liked were the Extras, I loved some of the artwork there.
Overall an awesome movie, this is one of the few animations I would watch more than twice:)

August 2, 2008

Author's Response:

Second one is out!

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Score: 9
zombie horde ii

"Well...I didnt do TOO bad..."

submission: zombie horde ii
date: January 28, 2006

Too...hard....hands...aching.....
The Idea is great, and it´s execution is even better, a bit too hard(I mean the Uzis are too expensive, and when I was finally able to purchase a turret, the zombies killed Bratworst and I lost...*crys*). Speaking of purchasing, that was a great idea, I specially like the descriptions, however they are a tad too expensive.
The graphics are neat, when using the knife(Not the machet or katana, just the initial knife) the arm looks a bit weird, but perhaps that´s cuz it´s overhead view. Something concerning graphics that bothered me was that when a mition started it automatically changed back to best, so I had to be constantly changing quality, perhaps you could add a quality button?. Also, considering I only got to the last they of Bratsworst research, I couldnt see any other zombie model, perhaps you should add more(Or give sum a collor swap), but in case i´m wrong(I´ll find out once I play again) and there are more zombie models, ignore that last comment.
Then it´s sound, the music fitted, and was nice, and the fx was great too.(I´m no good reviewing sound...).
Overall, it´s an awesome game, I wouldnt be shocked if I saw it on the front page:).

Author's Response:

there is a quality button. hit P to change quality, and it saves. it says that in the purchase menu, though i guess it's not too obvious? the text IS pretty small...

thanks for all the feedback though.

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Score: 6
Aerith/Aeris Dress

"You really dont know how to please the fans.....;P"

submission: Aerith/Aeris Dress
date: January 25, 2006

The gal looked...actually she looked hawt, and those clothes looked nice on her....*dr00ls*.
The background music was a great choice(You cant go wrong with anything from FF7, you just...cant).

Author's Response:

:P

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Score: 9
DBZ in a Nutshell -New-

"........WOW!"

date: January 25, 2006

.....Now I hate the original DBZ in a nutshell, thanks a lot:P.
I forgot to mention on my review of part II(I saw part II before part 1:P) that it had(and this one too) a really smooth animation, sure, the guys are cery simple(and I mean VERY) but the animation makes it sooooo worthy.
The original audio was funny(not FUNNY, just funny) but if you mix it with your stylish drawings/animation, that audio gains a whole new dimension, I hafta see more of your things!.

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks.

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